“I’m Fine”(poem)- part I

Last week, I had posted a poem on depression- “I’m Fine”. So , before writing the poem (posted previously) , I had written another one. Let’s just say this was the first one and I ended up adding and changing lines in it, which ultimately resulted in the one I had posted earlier. It was also a part of my internship program.

**the lines- Because it’s a bit depression,ocd……….to me; where taken from BTS member, Suga’s solo song, ‘The Last’.

I’m Fine (first part)

Please give me a remedy,

This world seems to get so lonely.

The painful night still shakes awake my sleeping dreams.

But, I still say, I’m fine.

I stretch my hands now and then

Just to find darkness holding onto them.

My pillow drinks the tears

That I’ve been hiding for years.

But, it’s no use,

I’m still stuck in the fears of my mind.

But, I still say, I’m fine.

I hate myself.

I’m losing myself,

Into the ocean of darkness

I want to erase myself.

Because it’s a bit depression, ocd,

They keep coming back to me.**

Honestly, I can’t see myself in the future.

This is too hard, I can’t go further.

The painful night still shakes awake my sleeping dreams,

But, I still say, I’m fine.

@atomoflifeblog

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